In the story is often emphasized that they are in love, but i admit that it’s still an erotic themed fanfic.
For this i often write in the description of my comic that the story will change a little because i’m not totally sure about some parts of the fanfic. I don’t know if i will continue or finish it.
I can’t see Discord forcing himself on Celestia, all i see is a 1000 years old love that didn’t falter in all that time.
As i said before i will modify the story since some parts are a little too strong or male chauvinistic
As counter to the themes of “Mark of Chaos”, and proof of my real feelings toward this couple, i’m currently drawing another comic entitled “Notte Insonne" (Sleepless Night), with my colleague FallenInTheDark doing the coloring, that is totally free from chauvinism of any kind.
"Eroticism" has nothing to do with it. He literally cursed Celestia to render her incapable of choosing anyone else, forever. No matter which way you try to spin it, Discord took her free will and came to collect whether she wanted it or not. That’s frankly disgusting and no amount of perfume sprayed on it will make it any less a shit heap. He DID force himself on her. He couldn’t win her by having things in common with her, getting to know her, anything else, he had to bite her in the throat and CURSE her. How romantic.
Did you read what i wrote? I AM going to change some parts of the story if i’m going to finish it. I can’t tell which but trust me. I’m not a male chauvinist…at all, on the contrary.
We did read, yes. The problem is, you already left in–word for word–all the parts where he completely rendered her incapable of making her own choices. It doesn’t matter where it goes now, as Tara pointed out, it’s already gone far around the bend of coercion and non-con. He could buy her all the roses and chocolate in the world, sing all the love songs, it does not change the fact he made certain she would never be able to say no.